Keith got robbed on the 45 M.B.T.A bus. There were four boys planning it, because they saw his ipod and sidekick. So the four boys split up into two groups, Tony and David in front and Anthony and Kevin behind him. The two boys behind him, began to make a lot of noise, distracting Keith while he sat with his ipod and sidekick on his lap. Right before the boys stop, the two in front, Tony and David, snatched the ipod and sidekick and ran off the bus with Anthony and Kevin following quickly behind them. Kevin yelled out "To the hideout!" as he got off the bus.
"Stop them!" Keith yelled. No one on the bus said anything or moved. Keith got up and exited the bus tyring to catch up to the boys. But by the time he got off the bus, they had disappeared.
My friends and I were getting on the bus the moment the four boys came tumbling off with the stolen goods. Then Romeo read Kevin's mind and decided to not get on the bus,and of course we didn't get on the bus either because we're his friend's and we was all out together.Romeo said they stole some stuff and now their going to their hide out. Im like "i seen david before ,I know were their hide out is".He said ok,and we went off to the hide out,and keith said "watch out!,they set a trap.We looked at him and said ,How you know that.He said "i think i seen this place before". took his stuff and ran off the bus at the next stop ...My father was upset and he said he should've did something, like beat them up(laughing)not beat them up but do something to teach them a lesson.
So they went off with a new phone and ipod...by the way the four boys names were,Tony,Daivid,Anthony,and Kevin.My fathers name is keith.Before me and my three friends got on the bus,My father yells and we hear him,and see the four boys running.I said to my three friends sam,romeo,and martinez,lets try and stop them four boys... and we end up stoping them and taking the phone and ipod back.Eventhough we all helped the hero was romeo,because before we saw them he read their minds,and when they was trying to run he cought them cause he's fast. He's a hero because heroes are people who save and help other people in need to have a better community witch we (mostly Romeo) did, but still we helped him so the four of us are the heroes of stopping Tony, David, Anthony, and Kevin...
This is a myth because human beings can't really read minds and move faster then fast...More about Romeo: Besides us helping him he been through a lot to save the world most of it anyways, and since he did all other stuff like saving and help people.
We knew he had them four boys because he been through a lot of adventures, and stuff Before I get on the bus I see the boys and my fathers like stop ,and im with my friends one girl and two boys ,there names are sam,romeo,and Martinez. And I said lets try and stop them four boys ...And we end up stopping them and taking the phone and ipod back, so basically me and my three friends was the "heroes"(laughing)even though we just felt like we did a good thing/was just helping...
So enough of that adventure, how did four people (two of them being girls) stop those four boys? Because Romeo works a lot and try and help his self and other people, but any ways he can move fast and read minds so he knew where they was going when we was about to get on the bus and, those four boys were about to get off. But still we helped him so the four of us are the heroes of stopping tony, daivid, Anthony, and Kevin...not only because he has an ipod and sidekick,but it was about respecting your elders and private property.because you can't just take what you want any time you feel like it.And thats like every day life people boys,and girls trying to or seceed at stealing witch is not good thats why they need this to stop ,and thats why we have people like me and my friends to help out.
My father, got robbed on the 45, M.B.T.A bus, there were four boys planning it, becuase they saw his ipod and sidekick. So the four boys took his stuff and ran off the bus at the next stop ...My father was upset and he said he should've did something, like beat them up(laughing)not beat them up but do something to teach them a lesson. So they went off with a new phone and ipod...by the way the four boys names were, Tony, Daivid, Anthony, and Kevin. My fathers name is Keith.
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keneidras story was good because she included alot of details but 1 thing i noticed was that her myth didnt have a moral of point
ReplyDeleteWell.. The story basically falls apart completely. There was really no point to the story. Also, the mind reading part was random, and it was badly written, sorry to say. It was kinda touch and go. It happened, that's it. There was no real story here.
ReplyDeleteYour story jumps from scene to scene. Its hard to follow but i kinda have an idea on what are you trying to say in this story
ReplyDeleteok i was confused threw out the whole "story" this wasent even called a a story this was just everywhere wth happened im so confused right now you shooould go back too writing class and learn something for once DUMBASS!
ReplyDeleteTim kiss my butt lol Ty john the only positive one...I kno wat I did wrong
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